Critiques by Jenny

“Two times I had the benefit of Jenny’s critiquing talents. Her insights and feedback were objective, honest, helpful and prompt. She was encouraging and supportive. I definitely recommend her critique services.” 

Are you looking for someone prompt, professional, and affordable to critique your picture book? Well, you’ve come to the right place. I’d be happy to help you develop your story. I have a passion for picture books and I bring that passion to every critique I do.

For $20 I will provide detailed and prompt feedback on…

Character development 


Writing structure and flow


And more.

This comes with a free revision critique as well.

For $50 I will provide the same services for an unlimited number of critiques for 6 months. 

**Please keep in mind my services are for prose picture books only**

I’m a SCBWI member, a picture book blogger, and the host of #KidLitCritiqueDay and Zoom into Picture Books.

If you’re interested in my critiquing services, please email me at 

“I received two complimentary critiques from Jenny. I found it to be helpful to have a new set of eyes review my manuscripts. The critiques helped me to see some changes that I could make to improve my manuscripts. I also found Jenny to be kind and passionate about helping other authors succeed!”

“I highly recommend Jennifer Pease for picture book manuscript critiques. I’ve had the pleasure of receiving multiple critiques from her over the past year. Jennifer does a great job highlighting what’s working well and explaining her comments. She also poses insightful questions to reveal elements that may be confusing, unbelievable, or uninteresting to the reader.”

  “Finally a critique partner whose opinion I respect. Jennifer Pease. Her comments, suggestions and ideas have helped to make my story lines stronger. Her comments are well thought out and end on a positive spin. Generous with her time spent on a critique, even if its the 3rd time around!”

 “I’ve had the opportunity to have two of my stories read by Jenny and in both cases she was really helpful and kind. I liked that she got back to me quite fast, and that she was very encouraging and positive in the way she offered her comments.”

  “Jenny’s feedback has always been spot on, signaling issues that might not be working with the story, identifying parts that are not very clear and sometimes even suggesting sentences that might be taken out. Of course, she also let’s me know what she loves about my writing, my characters and story.  In all cases, her comments have definitely helped me improve what I needed or to look at my story with a new perspective and find better ways to make it shine. I’m very thankful to have had Jenny on my side in my writing journey.” 

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